About Me

Jessica is the coordinator of student life and multicultural programs at the HACC-Gettysburg Campus. She is also an English instructor and serves as an academic advisor as well. And because all of those professional responsibilities weren't enough, she's also the mayor of her hometown.

So, in her spare time (yes, that's supposed to be humorous), Jessica enjoys collecting vintage jewelry, viewing classic films, asking tough questions and baking mass quantities of cupcakes.

Monday, February 7, 2011

Sh*t my rhetorical essay says

The bumper sticker, I think, is a wonderful example of social rhetoric. I used this example specifically to tie-in the messages that Covino, Lynn and D’Angelo share with us in this weeks’ readings regarding the traditional and contemporary applications of rhetorical pedagogy. While I realize could have much to say in regards to my previous post, I’ll try to keep things simple (which is ironic considering the subject matter). I might be wrong to make these associations, but what if:

1) we see the bumper sticker as an allegory for traditional rhetorical pedagogy. To me, the bumper sticker is merely a simplified message whereas (to nod to Steven Lynn) “form” is “function.” The function is to relay a message—whether it be profound or something silly—through a medium (mode) which allows for no rebuttal, discussion, etc. It is, as I mention in my own essay, a “passive” mode of communication. That being said, I took the form of the bumper sticker as a way to perceive the traditional use of the 5 paragraph essay. While you can’t obviously say so much in a 2” x 6” block of space, I have to ask: what can you really say within the confines of a 5 paragraph essay?

2) To assume that a proper argument (one which would please the likes of Quintilian, for example) can be made in the form of a 5 paragraph essay is as ridiculous as assuming that you will be able to sway someone with flashy bumper sticker. Is it possible? Sure. Is it likely? Not really.

3) I mentioned earlier “form” and “function” of the bumper sticker. Its limited form limits its function. To assume that the aim of rhetoric is merely to convince your audience is, in fact, quite limiting. Indeed to give a student a particular task with a strict rubric with a particular goal in mind is—you guessed it—limiting.

I took from the readings a few things that have helped me understand the function (aim) of rhetoric, as well as its diverse forms (modes). To escape the limited scope of the traditional rhetorical pedagogy, I interpreted the function of rhetoric is to persuade someone to see that your point of view is valuable (or valid?). I’m not 100% convinced that a well-developed rhetorical assignment has one purpose only: to persuade. If we assume that this is so, then we are also saying that an audience need not think critically about the subject they are reading if the audiences’ job is to give their attention in exchange for conviction. I would like to give more power to the audience. If ancient rhetoricians tell us that a well-developed argument takes time to consider in its fullest potential, then wouldn’t an audience require the same or similar allowances? If a teacher maintains that a persuasive argument MUST convince, then we are teaching a paradox: writers do the thinking for their audiences. But in a classroom environment, who do we consider the “audience?” The student? The teacher? Probably both at times. Perhaps it is better to envision the function of rhetoric as a way to convince an audience to see in new ways.

I propose that Covino, Lynn & D’Angelo lead us to envision rhetoric as a process which enables a student to develop his or her ideas in various forms as part of a larger dynamic social context. I enjoy that Covino points out “the dynamism of rhetoric,” as it is precisely this kind of attitude that, well, gets us somewhere (nod to the bumper sticker, car, huh huh?). I was waiting for the word to be uttered: synecdoche. The parts equal the whole; the whole identifies with its parts. I used several modes—narrative, exposition, argumentation and persuasion—in my essay particularly because I wanted to show that the parts (various modes of rhetoric) can achieve a desired effect (the whole).

Finally, I’ll mention that I purposely tried to maintain that bumper stickers are neither good nor bad. In fact, they simply are. As I look over it now, I’m not sure if I properly do that; I wanted to suggest that is the responsibility of the viewer to perceive (and internalize) what he or she wants to when presented with (bumper sticker) rhetoric. And by that same vein, I wanted to further point out that the responsibility of a teacher is to present various modes (as tools) to his or her student so that they may be equipped to articulate a particular message—be it profound or even silly--as well as a way to understand the "global quality" of rhetoric. Let’s hope those “tools” are not restricted to the form of a 5 paragraph essay (production). Or a bumper sticker (consumption).

5 comments:

  1. I know I'm in the minority here, but I see a certain value in the five paragraph essay...if it's used only as a suggested guide. I've seen students who are so terrified of writing, that if we can "suggest" to them what "might" make sense to include in each paragraph and we (they think blessedly so) give them permission to stop at a certain point - the five paragraph essay is simply a starting point, a guide - - a "security blanket" of sorts, to get them a bit more accustomed to and comfortable with writing - and then bit by bit, we show them how to ease away from this format. Just some food for thought.

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  2. Hi Annette- You have an excellent point, and I'd bet you weren't in the minority. I see value in the 5 paragraph essay, and I like that you point out that we should keep the nervous or resistant writer in mind. Forgive me for not writing more (I'm responding via phone...ahhh technology!), but my beef with the 5 paragraph essay is teaching an over-reliance on one particular form. I see more value in teaching various ways to construct an argument. I think you hit the nail right on the head! :)

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  3. Ya know...after reading this I think I sound rather stuffy & judgmental regarding "structure" when, in actuality, learning a particular structure is precisely what helped me learn how to write! Crap. I didn't mean to sound so preachy. Perhaps I'm just overly excited about my underlying feelings about this week's readings: that they're interconnected and yet should all be valued independently.

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  4. Great bumper sticker analogy.

    Interesting that you bring up rubrics. I'm torn about them. I've written them, I've used them, and I do see the value in them. At the same time, giving them such guidelines ahead of time can be limiting . . . or, in the worst case, encourage students to only do what they need to do for a grade.

    I guess it depends on perspective--to some students, the structure given by a rubric or formula is limiting but to others it's helpful and safe--which may be challenging to them depending on their comfort level with writing.

    That's where teachers need the trust and freedom to differentiate and teach their students in whichever way is best for the student . . . and that's not something that can ever be standardized.

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  5. Jess, when you say "teachers need to the trust and freedom to differentiate...and that's something that can never be standardized," I want to kiss you. Okay--how bout a hug instead? Ha. No, I think you are PRECISELY right! And I keep thinking about what Annette said, and I think that both of you are right to point out the value in rubrics when the need is present.
    :-D

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